Goldfish Banner

[Ranchumaniax]

Im going to place an order to make a Banner for Koi & Goldfish Show.
I did some work on designing the banner myself, so i know it's not look professional. So i need some comment and suggestion on these 2.

Banner # 1

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/xxxxxxxxxxxxBanner03.png

Banner # 2

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/xxxxxxxxxxxxBanner02.png

[Casper]

I like banner #1, it's much easier to read and not so "busy"

edit: Maybe you should put your website address on the banner as well.

[Ranchumaniax]

Thank you for your comment, Casper!

Here are another newly designed;

Banner #3

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/xxxxxxxxxxxxBanner04.png

[Jed]

I think it's looking similar to Goldfish Utopia web site. :exact:

[suphi]

#1, but if I were you I'd make the pictures of those fish on the side smaller (or even get rid of them) so the main focus will be the xxxxxxxxxxxx logo. You'll want that to really stand out when people take a quick glance at the banner.

[Ranchumaniax]

Banner #4

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/xxxxxxxxxxxxBanner05.png

[cowiche ponder]

Banner #4

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/xxxxxxxxxxxxBanner05.png

I like this one or #1. Take out the @ sign as it could be confusing to some.

#1 is almost too busy with all the fish on it..though I understand wanting to have them all on there. That is why I like #4 better. You DO need to keep the web site on there even though you will (right??) have business cards to give to people. Someone might not grab one but remember that the web page is the company name as well.

[Ranchumaniax]

Thank you for all comment and suggestion.
Here is a update on my banner after i took all of everybody advice.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/06.png

[Ranchumaniax]

And also a T-Shirt!

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/front.jpghttp://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk113/xxxxxxxxxxxx/back.jpg

[cowiche ponder]

what is everyone's opinion..

New arrival or new arrivalS? Maybe new shipments? :youtellme: singular arrival just doesn't sound right unless it is A new arrival...but then a new shipment each month is better..but isn't there often more than one?

:confuse::confuse:

[suphi]

I'm advocating "new arrivals".:yess:

The last banner is the best one so far.

[Ranchumaniax]

Anything else you guys recommend on changing on the last banner?